Wednesday, November 6, 2019

Assignment 22

https://youtu.be/lUd4Q2FCCIk

Unlisted, so make sure to bookmark this blog post or the video if you need to come back!

Reflection on feedback:

  • Place camera higher. Unfortunately, I was unable to do that for this recording but I will keep it in mind for future assignments!
  • Don't turn left and right. Sounds good, heard about that one in a recent lecture also! 
  • Try to be more relaxed. Hopefully not turning helped with that as well as making some sentences shorter so I could go a little slower.
  • Do same hand gesture for 8/10 statistic as I did with 4/5 statistic. I didn't do this because in my head, I thought it would be more distracting to pay attention to both my hands to read my fingers and it would maybe affect the memory for the 4/5 statistic which I deemed to be more important (i.e. people transpose the two similar hand gestures for the statistics).
  • Mixed on athletic shirt. I understand, I felt that way too but from the lecture it seemed that we should wear what's most appropriate for the product we are presenting. I think Dr. Pryor gave the example of a farmer wearing overalls, though I don't recall if that is applicable for all atmospheres.
  • Pace of voice on subscription options. If I speak a little faster on the rest of the pitch and slower there, I think that'd be fine since that point is a bit more condensed with information. As the person mentioned, I don't think it'd matter much but I'm happy to have read his thoughts.
Thank you everyone for their feedback!

What I changed:
  • Didn't turn.
  • Removed some more words in an attempt to be more relaxed when speaking. 
  • Wore a different athletic shirt that wasn't Gator affiliated and in my opinion, a bit more appropriate in style for an elevator pitch. 

1 comment:

  1. Hi Angel,
    It seems like you really took the time to analyze and think about the feedback you received. You took a solid approach and didn’t blindly follow what people said nor did you ignore them; you took the parts you thought were valuable to make corrections, and I think you did a great job with it. I honestly don’t know what else I would tell you to improve. Good job!

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