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Reflection on feedback:
- Place camera higher. Unfortunately, I was unable to do that for this recording but I will keep it in mind for future assignments!
- Don't turn left and right. Sounds good, heard about that one in a recent lecture also!
- Try to be more relaxed. Hopefully not turning helped with that as well as making some sentences shorter so I could go a little slower.
- Do same hand gesture for 8/10 statistic as I did with 4/5 statistic. I didn't do this because in my head, I thought it would be more distracting to pay attention to both my hands to read my fingers and it would maybe affect the memory for the 4/5 statistic which I deemed to be more important (i.e. people transpose the two similar hand gestures for the statistics).
- Mixed on athletic shirt. I understand, I felt that way too but from the lecture it seemed that we should wear what's most appropriate for the product we are presenting. I think Dr. Pryor gave the example of a farmer wearing overalls, though I don't recall if that is applicable for all atmospheres.
- Pace of voice on subscription options. If I speak a little faster on the rest of the pitch and slower there, I think that'd be fine since that point is a bit more condensed with information. As the person mentioned, I don't think it'd matter much but I'm happy to have read his thoughts.
Thank you everyone for their feedback!
What I changed:
- Didn't turn.
- Removed some more words in an attempt to be more relaxed when speaking.
- Wore a different athletic shirt that wasn't Gator affiliated and in my opinion, a bit more appropriate in style for an elevator pitch.
Hi Angel,
ReplyDeleteIt seems like you really took the time to analyze and think about the feedback you received. You took a solid approach and didn’t blindly follow what people said nor did you ignore them; you took the parts you thought were valuable to make corrections, and I think you did a great job with it. I honestly don’t know what else I would tell you to improve. Good job!