I like how you started your elevator pitch with a personal anecdote. Also, you were able to effectively backup your statements and claims with facts and statistics. I still believe your home gym box is a good idea and could potentially revolutionize the home fitness industry. The videos are a must in order to make this product a viable idea, as people will need the guidance because they do not know how to use the product or workout in general.
Hello Angel, I think your elevator peach was overall good. There are some things that I would like to suggest; since your selling workout equipment and instructional videos, may be dressing like your gym ready could catch the audience attention more. Also just try to relax while you are speaking, you clearly know what you are talking about, you have really good fact and statistics to back you up.
Hey Angel,
ReplyDeleteI like how you started your elevator pitch with a personal anecdote. Also, you were able to effectively backup your statements and claims with facts and statistics. I still believe your home gym box is a good idea and could potentially revolutionize the home fitness industry. The videos are a must in order to make this product a viable idea, as people will need the guidance because they do not know how to use the product or workout in general.
Hello Angel,
ReplyDeleteI think your elevator peach was overall good. There are some things that I would like to suggest; since your selling workout equipment and instructional videos, may be dressing like your gym ready could catch the audience attention more. Also just try to relax while you are speaking, you clearly know what you are talking about, you have really good fact and statistics to back you up.